Sunset on the Chesapeake Bay Bridge Photo by Amy McGrath |
Several years ago, when I was still teaching high school, I had an opportunity to observe classes at a model school in Worcester, MA. A 7th grade language arts class opened with a discussion of their homework from the previous evening. Now, years later, I'm still returning to that 7th grade assignment because it was so incredibly thought-provoking. The students were asked to go home and make a list of "where poetry hides".
When I saw today's prompt, "between the clouds and the water", I immediately thought that would be a place where poetry would hide! I've always been drawn to the water, particularly the ocean, and am blessed to live so near the Atlantic coast and the Chesapeake Bay. I can have my feet in the sand in about 15 minutes and it's perfect for me.
What about you? Where does poetry hide in your life? In your city? Are you moved by clouds and water? Stormy skies or sunshine and fluffy clouds? Maybe this prompt can be a poetic vacation, a way for you to give words to your dream location.
Whatever your choice, I look forward to reading your poems!
Amy McGrath
Word Prompts
between the clouds and the water
where poetry hides
fantasy location
vacation
in my world
Image Prompt
Incoming Storm on Topsail Island, NC photo by Amy McGrath |
I wasn't ready to write a playful poem. Besides, I already had this one as a rough draft.
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Yay, day 4 done, I used the where poetry lies prompt: https://unassortedstories.wordpress.com/2017/10/04/where-poetry-dies/
ReplyDeleteMy Day 4 post !
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The imagery of poetry hiding enticed me. My piece for Day 4:
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I was reminded of my childhood - http://www.katelynthomas.com/2017/10/octpowrimo-day-4-rowboat.html
ReplyDeleteOf course, poetry hides under the bed! What beautiful pictures that somehow led me to whimsy. Thank you! https://bethandwriting.blogspot.com/2017/10/october-4-where-does-poetry-hide.html
ReplyDeleteHere I go. Day 4 https://whisperingwithwords.wordpress.com/2017/10/04/there-lies/amp/
ReplyDeleteI thought I was going to write about the clouds in the sky last night- that did not happen...
ReplyDeleteday 4>>>>https://theartistsdate.blogspot.co.uk/2017/10/day-4-between-clouds-and-water.html
Hi there! A bit late this year, but nevertheless , here's my entry for Day 4 :
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Loved this prompt and the opportunity of exploring with words, thanks :-)
Sunsets, sunrises, and the end of the year: Give Way to Gold
ReplyDeleteHere's mine: http://biancasbookblog.blogspot.co.uk/2017/10/octpowrimo-day-4-between-clouds-and.html
ReplyDeleteI'm up in the clouds on day four... http://februarywriter.blogspot.com/2017/10/octpowrimo-day-4.html
ReplyDeleteHere goes my Day 4
ReplyDeleteJust managed to pen whatever was going in my mind.A rushed work :)
http://musingssurvive.blogspot.in/2017/10/a-whorl-of-colours.html
Day 4 didn't go where I had planned at all. I may get to write the other poem I started earlier still, but for now, these are the words that needed out.
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Many false starts on today's poem, but in the end I am the "Ocean's Daughter"... https://seekingmeme.wordpress.com/2017/10/04/oceans-daughter/
ReplyDeleteHere is my creation for today. I really liked this prompt.
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http://missdragonlady.blogspot.com/2017/10/todays-prompt-is-very-whimsical-and.html
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ReplyDeleteHere's my poem for Day 4
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I almost didn't finish this. My month of poetry, interrupted by grief.
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https://medium.com/@tolu/anamnesis-aab5983a72a4 …
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I couldn't comment on your blog. I'm so sorry for your loss. Sending you lots of love and hugs.
DeleteI am so sorry for your loss and grateful you had them in your life. Breathe in their scent. It shall never leave you.
DeleteI loved your poem. Sending hugs and healing thoughts. xoA
DeleteThanks, everyone! I appreciate your thoughts.
DeleteDay 4 of the Poetry Challenge.
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Click on the link to read:
© Anke Hodenpijl 10/4/2017
https://indoketut.wordpress.com/2017/10/04/octpowrimo2017-2/
Posting on behalf of Sudha Reddy for Day 4. Below is her entire poem.
ReplyDeleteThe Day 4 topic is so blissfully chosen.
Between the clouds and the water.....The beautifully setting sun, toasting in all possible golden hues......
What a joy that would be, to be able to silently say Good morning and Goodbye to the Sun every day.
It can happen only if we fantasize on the thought of such joy....������
The Great Mystery
The creation is a maestro, an ever unfolding mystery
Unraveling only for those who can see its magnificent mastery
There is that harmony between the opposites within its tapestry
Between the harmonious opposites, there is the silent majesty
The fringe of eloquent silence is filled with colors, in its artistry
The sound of silence is present between the cloud and the water
The scent of silence is present between this wave and the next
The power of silence is present, as in the hummingbird’s wing flutter
The melody of silence is present in the incessant cooing of the bird
In my world, the poetry hides in this fancied location
To reach that silence, I need not vacation
To find these neglected joys that are within my reach, is the vocation
When I feel the need to replenish my joyous creation
From the mystery of the creation comes the Joy
From the Joy of silence comes the creation
From the eye in the heart ......A perfect vision
Both are beautifully imbibed .....with my submission ������sr
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ReplyDeleteI always find it interesting when the muse takes a left turn..... Here is my Day 4 Poem https://zwabisabi.blogspot.com/2017/10/peripatetic-perspectives.html
ReplyDeleteAfter visiting Shadow Poetry, I decided to write a cascade.
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My first crack at a Minute Poem. Day 4:
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I started writing about inbetween spaces and ended up here:
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My poem for the 4th Day: Where Poetry Hides
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I went with a haiku, I love walking through and among the trees and they do inspire often but sometimes nothing will come to the fore :) https://scribblesfrommetoyou.wordpress.com/2017/10/05/octpowrimo-4-where-poetry-hides-haiku-13/
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ReplyDeleteFor day 4
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A L'Arora from me :)
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