What jumps out at different people from this prompt may vary, but two things strike me as especially interesting:
- the plural (poems and notes, not just poem or note)
- you (who is 'you' in this situation - and what might this tell us about the speaker?)
What you produce today may therefore suggest multiple poems and/or notes to a single 'you' - which could be a parent, child, lover, friend, admired celebrity, someone who is now deceased...
Think, too, about why multiple poems and notes might be important to your poem's concept.
Plus, what form(s) might these poems and notes take? And why is the speaker of your poem writing them?
'You' could also be multiple people - so perhaps consider addressing a group if you are struggling to think of a single person to be the subject of your poem.
As the image prompt above also shows, 'notes' might also suggest musical notes as much as Post-It notes!
Suggested forms
To me, 'notes' implies something slight and fleeting, so in terms of suggested form, I'd like to propose a poetic structure that reflects this - maybe a tanka or cinquain.
Everyone knows about haikus, but a tanka is another five-line form of Japanese poetry. As you can see from www.familyfriendpoems.com, it starts off like a haiku (thanks to the 5-7-5 syllable format), before ending with two lines of 7 syllables each. Great to ease you into this month of poetry!
Cinquains are equally brief, with their five lines consisting of 1 word, then 2, then 3, then 4, before ending with a 1-word line.
Word prompts
sing
redrafts
practice
scribbles
loving
And to finish, a quotation that might inspire you, from the great Robert Frost:
Happy writing!
-- Bianca
Remember that our prompts are only suggestions - go wherever the muse takes you.
In the meantime, read other participants' poems, share the #octpowrimo hashtag on social media, and add your link to your own poem in the comments below.
Good morning from here in Switzerland. Here is my take on the notes theme...
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Thanks for letting us know what part of the world you're from. It would be amazing if everyone did. It's wonderful picturing people all over the world writing poetry together.
DeleteAll three forms are amazing. A wonderful journey of experiences :)
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You too!
DeleteOh I do love this, especially the 'Redrafting. How.' How indeed. Lovely to be able to participate in another poetry write with you, Ladylee!
DeleteLyrical magic. Loved both the poems.
DeleteIt's a good thing that there isn't more than one of me. One is probably too many.
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I love that you incorporated the word prompts into the poem!
DeleteSharp and crisp tanka from you, Cara. Good to see you back :)
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ReplyDeleteI just give a try to it poems and notes
ReplyDeleteThat last line! Really thought provoking! Keep writing!
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ReplyDeleteHere's my submission for the day!
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DeleteHere is my Tanka on Notes!
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Oh how lovely! I do love the sound of the cello (musician here, but I don't play cello unfortunately. My students do though.)
DeleteI love this. This is an awesome way to link the sound of the cello!
DeleteGood night from the other half of the world in Kuala Lumpur, Malaysia! Today's theme and poetic forms were great, but as usual brain veered off into much darker territory. Warning: disturbing and discomfiting. I'm so sorry, I do try to write lighter stuff but recently a lot has been weighing on my mind with regards to social issues and other things.
ReplyDeleteI'll catch up on everyone's poetry within the next few days, am fighting germs!
https://shukuen.blogspot.com/2018/10/octpowrimo-2018-day-2-love-notes-to-mama.html
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ReplyDeleteYour challenge has awakened me from my slumber...I needed to return to my writing...thank you... https://talesofafamily.blog/2018/10/02/a-reminder-of-your-homecoming/#more-14621
DeleteWhat a lovely poignant piece. It captures the struggle of memory so well.
DeleteThis is more of a note to myself, but not really on prompt.
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http://colorsofthefall.blogspot.com/2018/10/notes.html?m=1
ReplyDeleteA tanka for Day 2
5 cinquains. And some notes by Townes van Zandt. https://unassortedstories.wordpress.com/2018/10/02/you-are-needed-now/
ReplyDeleteOh I absolutely love this, Angela! <3 It is so true. And so needed.
DeleteHere's my take on it -
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Two tankas. If I'd been feeling especially clever today I might have played with the formatting a little bit to also create a palimpsestic image as well. But not today!!
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Beware, very political and very emotional:
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Powerful piece!
Deletethank you, Michele
DeleteDay 2..My first tanka. I couldn't do justice as it was not easy. But tried.
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A few words on when words fail: How I Love You
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ReplyDeleteHere's my post for today: https://wordpress.com/view/serendipity756.wordpress.com
ReplyDeleteThis was a very nice challenge, I loved writing for it. So here's what came out: https://spiralartist.wordpress.com/2018/10/02/shriving-pew-day-two-notes-to-you/
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed this. Kind of a mystic nihilism. Some great lines (between the legs of the earth). Thank you.
DeleteOh I really liked this. All the notes, all the imagery, the wideness to the small, beginning with a saviour and ending with one or the lack of one.
DeleteThank you :)
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ReplyDeleteIn turn, I liked this. I liked the violent edge it has, the sort of apocalypse-now vibe. Thank you for sharing (and your kind words)
DeleteGreetings from Connecticut! Here is my poem for Day 2
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I love the 'bird on a wire' picture
DeleteDay 2: Quickening Notes experiencewriting.com/2018/10/02/octpowrimo-day-2-quickening-notes/
ReplyDeleteDay 2 - an acrostic poem inspired by a self compassion meditation. https://thewabisabiwriter.blogspot.com/2018/10/circles-of-practice.html
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Pretty trite to use the prompt as a title but it works. http://hittingthemark-jones.blogspot.com/2018/10/poems-and-notes.html
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ReplyDeleteTonight’s poem imagines me visiting the tomb of the poet Vergil, where people often leave notes to him in a tripod.
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ReplyDeleteI have to admit- I struggled a bit with this one.
ReplyDeleteHere is my take.
Day 2: https://galaxychasher.blogspot.com/2018/10/2-poems-to-you-notes-and-poems-plural.html?m=1
It came out well, for all you struggled with it! I do love the 'tranquility' as the last sentence of the first part.
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My Day 2: https://charmedchaos.com/2018/10/03/swoon-for-the-moon/
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https://mandibelle16.wordpress.com/2018/10/03/octpowrimo-day-2-photo-challenge-tankas-safari-silence-amwritingpoetry-photochallenge/
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ReplyDeletea tanka on the day 2 prompt
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Poet's cloister
Inside the pure heart
With a calm mind
Muse is unpredictable
The flow is unstoppable..sr