Friday, October 26, 2018

Day 26: Inside out

Predictably, when I put this one to the wisdom of the internet, the first and most prominent result was this:


...from a certain popular Disney/Pixar movie.

Which of course you can write about if you would like to.

Funnily enough, though, I didn't have an instinctive response to this prompt. Nothing that immediately came to mind. So I had to think. And here is my question to help you:

What is inside you (thoughts, feelings etc) that should be out to the world, but aren't? Do you have anything inside you that is out, but that you didn't want to be? Or maybe you are relieved that these 'inside' feelings are finally 'out'?

Suggested forms

A sonnet comes to mind, thanks to the volta (or 'turn') at line 8, which marks the turning point between one set of ideas and another.

Word prompts
open
secret
introspective
reveal
discover

For an alternative take on 'inside out', here's Groucho Marx:



Happy writing!

-- Bianca

Remember that our prompts are only suggestions - go wherever the muse takes you.
In the meantime, read other participants' poems, share the #octpowrimo hashtag on social media, and add your link to your own poem in the comments below.

30 comments:

  1. This is my take on the inside out theme...

    https://peacockpoetryblog.wordpress.com/2018/10/26/inside-out/

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    1. With clarity ,simplicity and so very beautifully written about yourself
      Thank you

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    2. I really enjoyed the phrasing of your lines. Wonderful choice of words that feels content!

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  2. I wear my heart on my sleeve :)
    https://ladyleemanilablog.wordpress.com/2018/10/26/day-26-inside-out/

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  3. From the life lessons... diary
    Numerous problems that could be prevented if caught on time ...so much pain and suffering could be alleviated... isolation and shame are the biggest challenges for getting help ....an attempt

    Inside out
    Many stories from inside count so many
    dark secret like a locker in the dark
    Words unsaid untold words
    Deep trouble unchartedly deep

    Hijack denial’s play monster hijack
    Flaws rationalized like no flaw
    With Shame isolation put to shame
    Motion suspended depression in motion

    Little listening caring a little
    Small dose of empathy feel not small
    Trust built around for all to trust
    To lift the spirit respect added to

    In trouble, shame and pain inside within
    Open safe haven to keep heart open... sr


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    1. There is a rhythm to this poem. I heard a mental drumbeat while reading it, if that makes any kind of sense.

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    2. A thoughtful write Especially, the structure is amazing.

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  4. Rushed work cannot gain brownie points...still have to finish the challenge..

    Day-26
    https://musingssurvive.blogspot.com/2018/10/the-fading-breathe.html

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  5. I wrote a sonnet because you suggested it, and I'm quite proud of getting it right.
    https://janedougherty.wordpress.com/2018/10/26/when-i-doubt-happiness/

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  6. https://paeansunpluggedblog.wordpress.com/2018/10/26/faceless-2/

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  7. For me this poem is tied to today's prompt: https://unassortedstories.wordpress.com/2018/10/26/please-be-careful/

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  8. https://castingsuspicion.blogspot.com/2018/10/inside-out.html

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  9. Here is mine for Inside Out #26

    https://poetryforhealing.com/2018/10/26/toxic/

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  10. Inside Out

    https://talesofafamily.blog/2018/10/26/aspirations/#more-14847

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  11. A Shakespearean sonnet for you all today. Enjoy!
    https://biancasbookblog.blogspot.com/2018/10/octpowrimo-2018-day-26-inside-out.html

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  12. Tried something different and special today. :D

    Inside Out

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  13. I love writing sonnets. I picked an Italian sonnet for today: Coming Out

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  14. Didn't use the prompt today. But the prompt did make me think of one of the "surplus" poems I've written for / in the course of OctPoWriMo, so I posted that instead.

    Also, day twenty-six. Wow. I thought I wouldn't see day five.

    Title: "Murderess"
    https://spiralartist.wordpress.com/2018/10/26/murderess-day-twenty-six/

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  15. http://tao-talk.com/2018/10/26/poetry-day-26-crazy-mary-pj-inspired/

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  16. https://barbarahuntington.com/2018/10/26/octpowrimo-2018-day-26-a-sonnet-for-today/

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  17. Just stuck with this one. Couldn't come up with anything so I'm sharing the #OctPoWriMo poem I did last year on this date.

    Illumination

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  18. https://syncwithdeep.wordpress.com/2018/10/27/introspective/

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  19. A day late! https://hittingthemark-jones.blogspot.com/2018/10/we-are-charmed-ones.html

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  20. Apologies for the delay. "The festivities" at home are a little too much for me to handle! Here's my take -

    http://iscriblr.com/freedom-from-samsara/

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