Sunday, October 20, 2019

Day 20 - Mountains or Oceans


I live in the Pacific Northwest with a view of Mt. Rainier. I live in awe of this sleeping volcano that could wake up at any time. It is majestic and beautiful and deadly. I also live near the Pacific Ocean. When I was young, my family would backpack out to the ocean and camp for a week every summer. We would play in the waves until we were completely numb, salty and exhausted then sunbathe in the cold while sand fleas jumped all over our feet. I wanted to be a mermaid. Once, my sister went out too far in an out-going tide and couldn't get back in. Luckily, my father was a strong swimmer and was able to pull her back. The ocean is vast, and beautiful, and deadly. 


Many people see a mountain and need to climb it, an ocean and they have to cross it, the ultimate physical challenges to overcome. Others like, skiers and surfers, use their unique qualities for sport. Others find peace admiring the view.

                                                    Ain't No Mountain High Enough
                           (for this prompt think ocean when they sing river if you so choose)

Word prompts: awe, strive, conquer, majestic, vast, bold, brisk, exhaustion (the happy kind)

Do you remember the first time you touched a mountain, or an ocean? When was the last time you were on a mountain? When was the last time you were at the ocean? Remember the sounds, smells, textures and tastes. Do you only imagine mountains and oceans, but have never experienced them yourself? How do you relate to these giants of earth? Do you stare in awe, actively interact, or need to conquer?

Suggested form: Haibun
You can find more examples at Contemporary Haibun Online
If you enjoy this form, I suggest checking out dVerse poetry pub's Haibun Mondays



 

Remember, our prompts are only suggestions, you can find your inspiration wherever your muse leads you. Please visit the other participants, share the hashtag, #OctPoWriMo on social media, and share your link in the comments below. Let us know how this journey into poetry is going for you and if this is your first year or if you have been with us from the beginning.


 
Maria L. Berg enjoys brisk swims in the Pacific Northwest. Her short fiction has appeared in Five on the Fifth, America's Emerging Writers Anthology and most recently in Writer Shed Stories. She writes and photo-illustrates Gator McBumpypants picture books and plays many instruments. You can find her poetry at experiencewriting.com.

37 comments:

  1. a tanka from me :)
    https://ladyleemanilablog.wordpress.com/2019/10/20/day-20-mountains-or-ocean/

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    1. Nice use of the word prompts in this pretty poem.

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  2. Posting Soul OF the Ocean- One of my first poems :)
    https://thetenthzodiac.wordpress.com/2019/03/21/soul-of-the-ocean-poem/

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    1. I like how this poem explores the contradictions of the ocean.

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  3. https://paeansunpluggedblog.wordpress.com/2019/10/20/not-so-alone/

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  4. Day 20

    https://rallentanda.blogspot.com/2019/10/octpowrimo-2019-week-3.html

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    1. I like the way this poem explores the idea of choice in the prompt.

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  5. Reflections on my journey from the foothills to the prairie, with bonus rhymes from my two friends here at the Grover Hotel.
    Haibun My Way: From the Mountains to the Prairie

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    1. The prose of this haibun leads to a lovely haiku. It feels like a real culmination and a satisfying ending.

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  6. Day-20

    https://musingssurvive.blogspot.com/2019/10/mountains-and-oceans.html

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    1. Great detail in the prose. You really took me there. And a pretty haiku, too.

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  7. Another cascade poem.
    https://janedougherty.wordpress.com/2019/10/20/sweep-down-to-the-sea/

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    1. I especially like the second stanza and the line "Etch in the bones a world now lost."

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    1. I like the descriptions, especially the trees stabbing, that portray the harsh nature of "unforgiving" mountains.

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  9. Can't believe it's Day 20

    Here are my words for today. Thinking about a mountain.

    gramswisewords.blogspot.com

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    1. This take on the prompt surprised me, but then made me think about the spiritual nature of mountains. :)

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  10. There's more to landscape than mountains or sea:

    https://xanhaiku.wordpress.com/2019/10/20/prairie/

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    1. I like this description of the space in between.

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  11. here is mine. https://isaiah46ministries.com/2019/10/20/mountaintop-courage-octpowrimo-2019-day-20/

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    1. Your description gave me a visual connection to conquering fear. Congratulations on making it to the top of the mountain.

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  12. My Haibun for today
    https://thewabisabiwriter.blogspot.com/2019/10/big-sur.html

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    1. I really enjoyed this, full of motion and memory.

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  13. My haibun for today, inspired by going through my pictures from my last backpacking trip to the ocean. experiencewriting.com/2019/10/20/writober-day-20-mountains-or-oceans/

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  14. My entry today is a call for support (poetic support) for the man who was the very first to publish a poem of mine in an online magazine. Many people have told me that Reuben shared their work long before someone else did. He's had a liver transplant, and he wrote 'read a poem for me'. Today I realised we can actually do that: https://unassortedstories.wordpress.com/2019/10/20/read-a-poem-for-me/

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  15. https://thefridaysparrow.wordpress.com/2019/10/20/ocean-acrostic/

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  16. My link for Ocean

    https://poetryforhealing.com/2019/10/20/cleansing/

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  17. Another wonderful prompt. All month long!
    Day 20:
    http://tao-talk.com/2019/10/20/octpowrimo2019-mountains-mountain-flame/

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  18. https://sgeoil.wordpress.com/2019/10/20/if-only-for-a-day/

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  19. Here's my post
    https://hittingthemark-jones.blogspot.com/2019/10/history-geography.html

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  20. Today's poem:
    https://odhranwrites.wordpress.com/2019/10/20/ocean-a-haibun/

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  21. Am I the last one who posts today?
    https://bethandwriting.blogspot.com/2019/10/octpowrimo-20-yellow-tang.html

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  22. https://rhscribbles.wordpress.com/2019/10/20/octpowrimo-2019-day20/

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  23. I love haibun! Sorry I am late! https://writersdream9.wordpress.com/2019/10/21/ocean-sprayhaibun/

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  24. http://iscriblr.com/oceanic-talent/

    Sorry fr being such a late comer to the party! :(

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